Rate my Yu-Gi-Oh deck? (semi-Marik)?

what people do with marik decks is make a grave keeper's deck, using like 3 necrovalleys, 3 grave-keeper's recruiter, 3 grave-keeper's assailants, etc. so yeah... look up grave-keeper's deck and see a good deck list. recruiters are like 5 bucks each though, so it isn't cheap.